First Draft Feedback

As we were behind with our filming our first draft lasted one minute and fourty two seconds but we still got feedback on what we have so far. Some of the best constructive feedback we got I have listed below:

• Need more movement, most of the camera shots too static
• Need more shots of artist in the centre 
• More locations that fit the genre 
• Should use colour correction on some shots
• Cut shots out off stairs, doesn't fit in with rest of video
• Use colour wall more in video